Monday, April 22, 2013

Second draft of a formal letter

117, Las Rosas
Concón, Chile
April 15, 2013





Dear Sir, 

I am writing to ask for more information about the "Antarctic Cruise" holiday which I saw advertised in "The Tourist". My husband and I are both interested in the holiday, but I would be grateful if you could give me more information about the travel package. 

Firstly, I would like to know more about the sort of conditions on the holiday, could you please tell me  about the accommodation provided. 

Secondly, I am slightly worried as I have never been on this sort of holiday before, I am wondering if you could send me information about weather, the risks and what kind of clothes we have to use?, something else I would like to ask about is food, do you offer full or half board?

Thirdly, I would prefer not to share a cabin unless I have to, because it is not comfortable at all. I addition, I would also like to know if you offer discounts for groups, are there any special offer?

Finally, could you possibly give me details about what extras there might be?

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully, 

Paulina Moraga Sepúlveda.